I just downloaded the new Pokemon Go game app on my iPhone. I was surrounded by small children (we had a sleepover at my house), and the shouting and grabbing induced a heightened state of Pokemon scarcity that caused a kid frenzy. I won the shout-and-grab battle, because I'm an adult and it's my phone. I quickly chose a name and created my avatar (the kids were screaming for the blue hair! no, the purple!) and I managed to scramble together a decent enough avatar before the kids' sticky fingers smudged the screen. I activated the camera view and the screaming and screeching reached a crescendo: there was a Pokemon in my bedroom. We rounded the corner, and sure enough a Charmander was sitting on my computer chair. I threw a couple of pokeballs at it--and caught it! Now it was the girls' turn, but as they reached and grabbed, the server became overwhelmed and the app shut down. Cue more kid shouting.
I probably should have let the kids have the first go, but... nah. It was a fun three minutes.
UPDATE: Looking back on this post, I can say that the unveiling of Pokemon Go was oddly of cultural and historical significance. It was short lived, but seeing kids and adults outside searching for Pokemon felt like traveling back in time, when people actually went outside to play and socialize. I hope that kind of energy pulses through the culture again.
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Sunday, December 14, 2014
Prologue, Jeremy Chikalto and Leviathan Island (Book II)
The prologue to my second book can stand alone, so I thought I'd post it to my blog for all to see. Enjoy! :)
Prologue
Mark Johnson didn’t expect death to
feel like a change in temperature. He set his briefcase down on the
mahogany desk in his spacious office, took one final swig of his
pumpkin-spice double latte, and opened up his executive-sized window.
Mark was a senior partner at Johnson, Smith & Jones, L.L.P., and
though he pulled in over $500,000 annually, he had pushed away his
late wife, Linda. Long days at the office and longer nights at Gilt
on Madison Ave. had put too much stress on their marriage. She’d
left Mark for a chemistry professor named Arnold. For
God's sake, the man didn't know a cufflink from a tie clip, and wore
a tie with short sleeves.
The divorce was decreed. Even his kids
divorced themselves from his surname, as if the whole corporation had
dissolved.
Tonight Mark meant to dissolve too. Both
his parents had expired long ago in Floridan opulence, after all, and
he had no educations of nieces or nephews to fund, no siblings to
rival. His children and ex-wife wouldn’t touch his assets, and he
hadn’t a need for them, really. What
an emptiness I have accumulated,
thought Mark as he climbed up on his window’s ledge.
Mark wanted to think wild thoughts and
have some profound connection to his time and place of death. He’d
chosen 11pm sharp, but he had no real reason for doing so. He’d
chosen his office window and the city sidewalk below for his body’s
final breath. Why? He didn’t know. It was sad, he thought, that
there was no poetry in his life.
As Mark Johnson leaned into the wind,
trying to elongate the cusp of his life, he glimpsed his destination,
and was disgusted. How had he missed this detail? Below, a wooden
awning stretched out across several storefronts. Large, striped
pedestrian crosswalk signs directed foot traffic through the narrow
tunnel. His place of death was a construction site. Mark tried to
back out of the deal, but had no leverage, and fell. His adrenal
gland surged, and he was horribly excited. The Earth rushing towards
him was magnificent, and nothing had ever felt as real as the air he
now penetrated. Tenth floor, ninth floor, eighth floor, he was almost
one with the ground. Fourth floor, third floor, second floor, and he
merged with the plywood of the construction site, shards of wood
impaling him as he liquefied on impact.
Mark felt a temperature change. He knew
from the ski trips he used to take with his family that a frigid
January sometimes felt like a sweltering July. It was all very
confusing, especially the fact that Mark was still thinking. He
opened his eyes.
Mark had entered the Haze. A buzzing
bright white light was soon replaced with humming purple rays. Mark
looked down at his blob of a body from an impossible angle, and
shrieked when he realized that his head wasn’t attached. It bobbed
up and down in space. He floated aimlessly for a time, watching the
shadows and lights shift in the distance, and then a strange suction
pulled him along. There was a glowing thread emanating from his
solar plexus, and a cat-like creature was tugging on it. His head,
though severed from his body, followed the cat as though it were
bonded to his flesh. Mark cried out and jiggled his arm, which was
still attached to his body. The cat turned around, meowed, and
pointed a paw above her.
Mark looked up and felt some part of his
being rise and separate from the bulk of his consciousness. The part
that had risen felt light and whimsical, like the first flurries of
the season. He remembered holding his newborn boys, crying and
laughing at once. The bottom part, though, was dark and heavy, slush
trampled by too many shoes. He was in a back room, screwing an
escort, stomach acid and rum sloshing up in his mouth. The cat was
pulling him down, down. And then there was an explosion of noise—the
hiss of a cat, the shriek of a wild boar, and then a two-toned voice,
saying, “Jeremy Chikalto! Apollyon’s animus!”
Mark Johnson swiveled his mushy head and
saw the cat hissing and backing away, whipping its gray and white
tail. The nearby shadows began to morph, and a large black shape
loomed towards him, polluting the Haze above it with swirls of oil.
Mark remembered all the times he had been afraid, and the memories
coalesced into a feeling of the deepest dread. His glowing cord was
drawn into the creature's terrible gravity, and Mark was being reeled
in. Mark howled as he entered the demon’s mouth, and was
incinerated in its throat. Everything was charred black. This time,
there was no mistaking the temperature.
Tuesday, August 12, 2014
The Labyrinth Wall, by Emilyann Girdner (Book Review)
Genre: Dystopian Fantasy Adventure, Young Adult / New Adult
Rating: 4.5 / 5
Rating: 4.5 / 5
The Labyrinth Wall, by Emilyann
Girdner, is a fast-paced dystopian fantasy. Girdner's first novel of
the Obsidian series took off running and the action never stopped.
Araina—a strong, independent young woman—is keeping to her loner
routine within the dangerous walls of the labyrinth, when suddenly
her sense of place and purpose is forever changed after witnessing a
mysterious man emerge from one of the labyrinth's walls.
The labyrinth is a dangerous,
fantastical place full of unique creatures and gruesome death. Its
inhabitants are all starved and must compete for resources. While I
easily adapted to the setting, the rapid introduction of new
characters disoriented me early on in my reading. I never did get a
strong sense of Simul, the main villain. There was also some
confusion about the age of the male characters, namely Darith and
Korun. However, once I recognized that the characters were all
roughly the same age, I was impressed with how Girdner managed to
juggle such a large cast of characters, all the while keeping each
voice unique. Araina and Blue's relationship was especially sweet and
refreshing.
I also liked how there are so many
romantic coupling possibilities for Araina—will she eventually find
love with Darith, Korun, Soll, or will she be perfectly content with
platonic relationships with all of her new companions—something
altogether new and rewarding for her.
I look forward to the second
installment in the Obsidian series and am eager to see Araina grow
and flourish in her expanding worldview.
Also, I heart labyrinths and mazes.
Saturday, May 31, 2014
Jeremy Chikalto and the Demon Trace Cover Reveal!
I am thrilled to present to you the Jeremy Chikalto and the Demon Trace front and back covers! This is the third and final book in The Hazy Souls series.
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| Jeremy Chikalto and the Demon Trace front cover, young adult paranormal fantasy |
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| Jeremy Chikalto and the Demon Trace back cover, young adult paranormal fantasy |
Tuesday, January 14, 2014
Jeremy Chikalto and Leviathan Island E-book FREE
Hey everyone! The e-book version of Jeremy Chikalto and Leviathan Island is now available for free in anticipation of the release of the third and final book in the series, Jeremy Chikalto and the Demon Trace!
I've only just made the change, so expect it to start appearing on major distributors' websites like Barnes and Nobles, Amazon, Apple, Sony, and Kobo within the next week.
I've only just made the change, so expect it to start appearing on major distributors' websites like Barnes and Nobles, Amazon, Apple, Sony, and Kobo within the next week.
Monday, October 7, 2013
Collingswood Book Festival 2013
This past weekend I had a booth at the Collingswood Book Festival. It was a great experience! Thank you to everyone who stopped by and purchased Jeremy Chikalto and the Hazy Souls and Jeremy Chikalto and Leviathan Island. The book festival also took place on my birthday, so you can only imagine how thrilled I was to meet new readers. :) Quite the birthday present. Below are some pictures of the booth.
I featured Jeremy Chikalto and the Hazy Souls and Jeremy Chikalto and Leviathan Island. Also represented at the Viral Cat Booth were the Fall 2013 Issue of Viral Cat, Steep Stony Road by Daniel Picker, Lawrence and the Machine by Jesse Blair, and Mirabelle the Duck and Faline the Swan by Judith DeBrosse.
| Viral Cat Press Book Booth, Collingswood Book Festival |
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| Lyrna the Fizdruft and Ghost |
| Set Up |
I featured Jeremy Chikalto and the Hazy Souls and Jeremy Chikalto and Leviathan Island. Also represented at the Viral Cat Booth were the Fall 2013 Issue of Viral Cat, Steep Stony Road by Daniel Picker, Lawrence and the Machine by Jesse Blair, and Mirabelle the Duck and Faline the Swan by Judith DeBrosse.
Monday, April 15, 2013
Jeremy Chikalto and the Demon Trace, Book III of The Hazy Souls (in progress)
So my young adult novels tend to run about 55,000 words each. It's what works for me. I'm writing the last book in the series now. I am so excited, it's ridiculous. Three weeks from now, I'll be in the Florida Keys with my laptop. Writing will happen. There will be wine, too.
I. Cannot. Wait.
Anyway, just wanted to update my readers on how things were going. I write between 400-1000 words a day, five days a week, depending on how quiet the kids are. I write quickly. It's fun. I'm about 10,000 words in now, but the entire novel is outlined and I sort of just write by the seat of my pants.
I love writing my books because I feel like I'm watching my favorite show and I'm really, really engaged. Does that sound terrible? Anyway, I'm a huge fan of Game of Thrones at the moment. If you're familiar with that show, and you're a fan like me, you know how you sort of lean in towards the screen? Writing is like that for me. I can't wait for the next chapter. :)
Thank you for being so patient.
So I'm thinking I'll be done the first draft by September. The second draft should be ready by December. Third draft, fourth draft--well, it's just minor tweaking at that point. I might miss the 2013 deadline, and now I'm looking at a Spring 2013 release.
Wish me luck!
I. Cannot. Wait.
Anyway, just wanted to update my readers on how things were going. I write between 400-1000 words a day, five days a week, depending on how quiet the kids are. I write quickly. It's fun. I'm about 10,000 words in now, but the entire novel is outlined and I sort of just write by the seat of my pants.
I love writing my books because I feel like I'm watching my favorite show and I'm really, really engaged. Does that sound terrible? Anyway, I'm a huge fan of Game of Thrones at the moment. If you're familiar with that show, and you're a fan like me, you know how you sort of lean in towards the screen? Writing is like that for me. I can't wait for the next chapter. :)
Thank you for being so patient.
So I'm thinking I'll be done the first draft by September. The second draft should be ready by December. Third draft, fourth draft--well, it's just minor tweaking at that point. I might miss the 2013 deadline, and now I'm looking at a Spring 2013 release.
Wish me luck!
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