Saturday, January 16, 2021

ANOM: Awakening by Jason R. James (Book Review)

A Blockbuster Movie in Your Head



Book Blurb: Jeremy Cross always thought of his life as being normal, but in the wake of a recent tragedy, he’s discovered that his idea of “normal” couldn’t be farther from the truth. Jeremy is a genetic anomaly—one of only a handful on the planet—with a new ability that no one thought possible.Thrown into a world of clandestine government agencies, international terrorism, and assassins-for-hire, Jeremy’s new idea of “normal” is fighting for his life. His only hope of survival depends on reconciling the person he thought he was with the hero he needs to be.
- - -


With visceral action scenes, tight pacing, and plenty of plot twists, James's debut novel delivers the superhero goods. Even in sections of dialogue or introspection, the book crackles with tension and drives the story forward. And in a universe populated with Marvel, DC, and indie material, James delivers us some fresh superpowers (no spoilers), which is no easy feat.

Sure, the book relies on a few familiar tropes like superpowers discovered in an accident, or a shadowy government organization. But it's a superhero story, right? The reviewers harping on this might as well not read any fantasy that has magic in it.

Plus ANOM: Awakening is more than a good guy/bad guy story, and many of the characters operate in gray areas. Like in the real world, their agendas sometimes overlap and sometimes clash as they jockey for power. Some characters are willing to do terrible things if, in their view, it serves the greater good. This theme is both timely and evergreen. Ultimately, though, the novel rests its moral center on our hero Jeremy Cross, who must summon the confidence and bravery to choose the best apparent path in an uncertain world.

I recommend the book for anyone who likes superheroes, sci fi, fantasy, or thrillers.

The story leaves us with some tantalizing mysteries, and I can't wait to read the next book in the series.

Wednesday, November 13, 2019

Drafting Stage: Warlock Fantasy Novel

I'm in the process of writing a new fantasy novel featuring a female warlock protagonist. My leading lady is a puppeteer who's lost some fingers in a mysterious incident involving the hollow of an oak tree. This book promises demons, blurred hero-anti-hero lines, and a dash of romance in what I hope to be a funny, whimsical tale of adventure.

I've mapped out beats, though these are sure to change as the characters have a way of pushing their own agendas. I learn about the characters' motives and worldviews through the process of writing, but the beats help move me along (less meandering!)

Friday, July 29, 2016

DNC + Opinions & Fire!

I have a funny relationship with opinions. I'm a pretty opinionated person--and those few who are close to me are never spared from hearing my take on things--but when I saw "few," I'm really saying, like maybe two people. Of course I'm close with family and some friends, but I've developed this habit of keeping my mouth shut and putting others' comfort ahead of my own.

When I was younger, I didn't really have a filter. This no doubt made me seem more impulsive, spontaneous, and possibly more interesting. But just as it rallied people behind me, it made some people dislike me. I was even told that I was annoying! Imagine that. If you know me now, I doubt "annoying" is something that you'd call me. I fancy myself agreeable, pleasant, and mild. I set people at ease if I'm one of many guests; however, I make people uncomfortable if I'm the only guest because there's no smooth volley of conversation. I've become so conditioned to not rock the boat socially, that I've forgotten how to inject myself into a conversation.

My opinions rage inside me. I look forward to being an elderly person because there's this idea that you don't care anymore about how other people perceive you. It's ridiculous, I know. Age shouldn't determine when you're allowed to live life fully.

I just finished watching the Democratic National Convention. It's fascinating to see everyone yap it out on social media. Some people boldly state their positions. Others go on the attack and paint their opinions on others' fb walls. It horrifies me to imagine owning so much of myself that it spills over and threatens to invade someone else's personal space. And then I realize, my personal space has already been taken over, hijacked by people who deem my pleasant, mild demeanor a mere background prop to their stage.

I'll try to navigate how to state my opinions and assert myself, but it's hard. I don't like how it seems permanent, like I'm not allowed to change my mind once the thought is out there. And people can summon so much rage that it seems draining to battle people in the cyber sphere.

Anyway, I'm inspired. Here's to hoping a spark of courage ignites the fire.

Thursday, July 7, 2016

Pokemon Go ... Go, now! ...Go?

I just downloaded the new Pokemon Go game app on my iPhone. I was surrounded by small children (we had a sleepover at my house), and the shouting and grabbing induced a heightened state of Pokemon scarcity that caused a kid frenzy. I won the shout-and-grab battle, because I'm an adult and it's my phone. I quickly chose a name and created my avatar (the kids were screaming for the blue hair! no, the purple!) and I managed to scramble together a decent enough avatar before the kids' sticky fingers smudged the screen. I activated the camera view and the screaming and screeching reached a crescendo: there was a Pokemon in my bedroom. We rounded the corner, and sure enough a Charmander was sitting on my computer chair. I threw a couple of pokeballs at it--and caught it! Now it was the girls' turn, but as they reached and grabbed, the server became overwhelmed and the app shut down. Cue more kid shouting.

I probably should have let the kids have the first go, but... nah. It was a fun three minutes.

UPDATE: Looking back on this post, I can say that the unveiling of Pokemon Go was oddly of cultural and historical significance. It was short lived, but seeing kids and adults outside searching for Pokemon felt like traveling back in time, when people actually went outside to play and socialize. I hope that kind of energy pulses through the culture again.

Sunday, December 14, 2014

Prologue, Jeremy Chikalto and Leviathan Island (Book II)


The prologue to my second book can stand alone, so I thought I'd post it to my blog for all to see. Enjoy! :)

Prologue


Mark Johnson didn’t expect death to feel like a change in temperature. He set his briefcase down on the mahogany desk in his spacious office, took one final swig of his pumpkin-spice double latte, and opened up his executive-sized window. Mark was a senior partner at Johnson, Smith & Jones, L.L.P., and though he pulled in over $500,000 annually, he had pushed away his late wife, Linda. Long days at the office and longer nights at Gilt on Madison Ave. had put too much stress on their marriage. She’d left Mark for a chemistry professor named Arnold. For God's sake, the man didn't know a cufflink from a tie clip, and wore a tie with short sleeves.
The divorce was decreed. Even his kids divorced themselves from his surname, as if the whole corporation had dissolved.
Tonight Mark meant to dissolve too. Both his parents had expired long ago in Floridan opulence, after all, and he had no educations of nieces or nephews to fund, no siblings to rival. His children and ex-wife wouldn’t touch his assets, and he hadn’t a need for them, really. What an emptiness I have accumulated, thought Mark as he climbed up on his window’s ledge.
Mark wanted to think wild thoughts and have some profound connection to his time and place of death. He’d chosen 11pm sharp, but he had no real reason for doing so. He’d chosen his office window and the city sidewalk below for his body’s final breath. Why? He didn’t know. It was sad, he thought, that there was no poetry in his life.
As Mark Johnson leaned into the wind, trying to elongate the cusp of his life, he glimpsed his destination, and was disgusted. How had he missed this detail? Below, a wooden awning stretched out across several storefronts. Large, striped pedestrian crosswalk signs directed foot traffic through the narrow tunnel. His place of death was a construction site. Mark tried to back out of the deal, but had no leverage, and fell. His adrenal gland surged, and he was horribly excited. The Earth rushing towards him was magnificent, and nothing had ever felt as real as the air he now penetrated. Tenth floor, ninth floor, eighth floor, he was almost one with the ground. Fourth floor, third floor, second floor, and he merged with the plywood of the construction site, shards of wood impaling him as he liquefied on impact.
Mark felt a temperature change. He knew from the ski trips he used to take with his family that a frigid January sometimes felt like a sweltering July. It was all very confusing, especially the fact that Mark was still thinking. He opened his eyes.
Mark had entered the Haze. A buzzing bright white light was soon replaced with humming purple rays. Mark looked down at his blob of a body from an impossible angle, and shrieked when he realized that his head wasn’t attached. It bobbed up and down in space. He floated aimlessly for a time, watching the shadows and lights shift in the distance, and then a strange suction pulled him along. There was a glowing thread emanating from his solar plexus, and a cat-like creature was tugging on it. His head, though severed from his body, followed the cat as though it were bonded to his flesh. Mark cried out and jiggled his arm, which was still attached to his body. The cat turned around, meowed, and pointed a paw above her.
Mark looked up and felt some part of his being rise and separate from the bulk of his consciousness. The part that had risen felt light and whimsical, like the first flurries of the season. He remembered holding his newborn boys, crying and laughing at once. The bottom part, though, was dark and heavy, slush trampled by too many shoes. He was in a back room, screwing an escort, stomach acid and rum sloshing up in his mouth. The cat was pulling him down, down. And then there was an explosion of noise—the hiss of a cat, the shriek of a wild boar, and then a two-toned voice, saying, “Jeremy Chikalto! Apollyon’s animus!”
Mark Johnson swiveled his mushy head and saw the cat hissing and backing away, whipping its gray and white tail. The nearby shadows began to morph, and a large black shape loomed towards him, polluting the Haze above it with swirls of oil. Mark remembered all the times he had been afraid, and the memories coalesced into a feeling of the deepest dread. His glowing cord was drawn into the creature's terrible gravity, and Mark was being reeled in. Mark howled as he entered the demon’s mouth, and was incinerated in its throat. Everything was charred black. This time, there was no mistaking the temperature.

Tuesday, August 12, 2014

The Labyrinth Wall, by Emilyann Girdner (Book Review)




Genre: Dystopian Fantasy Adventure, Young Adult / New Adult
Rating: 4.5 / 5


The Labyrinth Wall, by Emilyann Girdner, is a fast-paced dystopian fantasy. Girdner's first novel of the Obsidian series took off running and the action never stopped. Araina—a strong, independent young woman—is keeping to her loner routine within the dangerous walls of the labyrinth, when suddenly her sense of place and purpose is forever changed after witnessing a mysterious man emerge from one of the labyrinth's walls.

The labyrinth is a dangerous, fantastical place full of unique creatures and gruesome death. Its inhabitants are all starved and must compete for resources. While I easily adapted to the setting, the rapid introduction of new characters disoriented me early on in my reading. I never did get a strong sense of Simul, the main villain. There was also some confusion about the age of the male characters, namely Darith and Korun. However, once I recognized that the characters were all roughly the same age, I was impressed with how Girdner managed to juggle such a large cast of characters, all the while keeping each voice unique. Araina and Blue's relationship was especially sweet and refreshing.

I also liked how there are so many romantic coupling possibilities for Araina—will she eventually find love with Darith, Korun, Soll, or will she be perfectly content with platonic relationships with all of her new companions—something altogether new and rewarding for her.

I look forward to the second installment in the Obsidian series and am eager to see Araina grow and flourish in her expanding worldview.



Also, I heart labyrinths and mazes.

Saturday, May 31, 2014

Jeremy Chikalto and the Demon Trace Cover Reveal!

I am thrilled to present to you the Jeremy Chikalto and the Demon Trace front and back covers! This is the third and final book in The Hazy Souls series.

Jeremy Chikalto and the Demon Trace front cover, young adult paranormal fantasy

Jeremy Chikalto and the Demon Trace back cover, young adult paranormal fantasy

Tuesday, January 14, 2014

Jeremy Chikalto and Leviathan Island E-book FREE

Hey everyone! The e-book version of Jeremy Chikalto and Leviathan Island is now available for free in anticipation of the release of the third and final book in the series, Jeremy Chikalto and the Demon Trace!

I've only just made the change, so expect it to start appearing on major distributors' websites like Barnes and Nobles, Amazon, Apple, Sony, and Kobo within the next week.

Monday, October 7, 2013

Collingswood Book Festival 2013

This past weekend I had a booth at the Collingswood Book Festival. It was a great experience! Thank you to everyone who stopped by and purchased Jeremy Chikalto and the Hazy Souls and Jeremy Chikalto and Leviathan Island. The book festival also took place on my birthday, so you can only imagine how thrilled I was to meet new readers. :) Quite the birthday present. Below are some pictures of the booth.

Viral Cat Press Book Booth, Collingswood Book Festival

Lyrna the Fizdruft and Ghost

Set Up

I featured Jeremy Chikalto and the Hazy Souls and Jeremy Chikalto and Leviathan Island. Also represented at the Viral Cat Booth were the Fall 2013 Issue of Viral Cat, Steep Stony Road by Daniel Picker, Lawrence and the Machine by Jesse Blair, and Mirabelle the Duck and Faline the Swan by Judith DeBrosse.

Monday, April 15, 2013

Jeremy Chikalto and the Demon Trace, Book III of The Hazy Souls (in progress)

So my young adult novels tend to run about 55,000 words each. It's what works for me. I'm writing the last book in the series now. I am so excited, it's ridiculous. Three weeks from now, I'll be in the Florida Keys with my laptop. Writing will happen. There will be wine, too.

I. Cannot. Wait.

Anyway, just wanted to update my readers on how things were going. I write between 400-1000 words a day, five days a week, depending on how quiet the kids are. I write quickly. It's fun. I'm about 10,000 words in now, but the entire novel is outlined and I sort of just write by the seat of my pants.

I love writing my books because I feel like I'm watching my favorite show and I'm really, really engaged. Does that sound terrible? Anyway, I'm a huge fan of Game of Thrones at the moment. If you're familiar with that show, and you're a fan like me, you know how you sort of lean in towards the screen? Writing is like that for me. I can't wait for the next chapter. :)

Thank you for being so patient.

So I'm thinking I'll be done the first draft by September. The second draft should be ready by December. Third draft, fourth draft--well, it's just minor tweaking at that point. I might miss the 2013 deadline, and now I'm looking at a Spring 2013 release.

Wish me luck!

Thursday, November 29, 2012

Make Your Words Count: Novels vs. Novellas



First, let's start with some famous novellas (generally considered a novella with less than 40,000 words):

 Of Mice and Men by John Steinbeck

Animal Farm by George Orwell

Heart of Darkness by Joseph Conrad

The Turn of the Screw by Henry James

The Metamorphosis by Franz Kafka


Novellas can pack a punch.

A story should only be as long as it needs to be. Don't spread a novella thin by writing towards the 50,000 word goal that qualifies it as a novel, etc. Just let the story tell itself, irrespective of word count.

And then some say, "Self-publishing has brought back the novella!" and I hope they're right.

But for all the "Yay!"s and "Huzzuh!"s, there's the real issue of classification and finding a readership.

Smashwords has this nifty sorter feature that allows people to click on an ebook length to help narrow down search options. But Smashwords also estimates your ebook's word count. So what if you've written a book that is 52,000 words long? This should qualify it for the "50,000 word +" category, right? Wrong. Smashwords, as was the case with my first book, can estimate a book's 52,000 word count at about 48,000 words, and in so doing, lump the book in with the 20,000 word novellas. This can be a problem because it can prevent a book from being discovered by its intended audience.

But you just said word count was a superficial assessment. Quality is better than word count. Right?

Yes, but some people think in terms of 1.) Novel and 2.) Short Story

Anyway, so I wanted my 52,000 word count to be just that and get me into the 50,000 + word category. How did I get around this conundrum? I tacked on the first few chapters of my second book to the end of my first book. This can work with any extra material you might have--author's bio, book teasers, etc.--so long as you aren't misleading your intended audience. If you've written a 35,000 word novella, don't include an additional 15,000 words at the end just to bump it into novel territory.

But maybe readers just need to catch on to the fact that that they can enjoy their favorite genres in less than 40,000 words.



Tuesday, November 13, 2012

Book Review: The Day Zombies Ruined My Perfectly Boring Life

The Day Zombies Ruined My Perfectly Boring Life by Jen Naumann



Synopsis:
Seventeen-year-old Emma Ferdig has spent her entire life stuck in an itty-bitty town that is basically smack-dab in the middle of nowhere. She’s not bored because there are always the same mundane things to do with her best friend Finn every single weekend, but bored as in there is literally nothing for a teenage girl to do that doesn't involve farm animals and the threat of law enforcement.

But now she would do pretty much anything to go back to that boring life.

Emma's life is turned upside down after a night of senior pranks by the discovery of a real, live (better make that dead) zombie in her own backyard. In a breakneck journey across the rural Midwest, Emma will recruit a minivan full of teenage misfits while trying to survive, and uncover the secrets behind this zombie invasion. She’ll discover the true identity of Finn’s mother, the dark conspiracy that has infiltrated the U.S. Army, and maybe even realize the person she has been waiting to save her was right by her side the whole time.

As it turns out, life in a boring little town hadn’t been such a bad thing, after all.


Page Count: 
Paperback, 338 pages

Published: 
June 2012 by At or With Me Publishing 
Rating:  
3.5 / 5 Paw Prints
1/2
 

Review:
Jen Naumann's The Day Zombies Ruined My Perfectly Boring Life is an apocalyptic zombie novel about seventeen-year-old Emma and her band of oddballs and misfits. Together, they strive to uncover the truth behind a virus outbreak that claims the lives of loved ones and changes the landscape of the United States forever. The action propels the novel forward at light speed, but the characters slow down the reading for all the wrong reasons.

It took me a third of the novel to accept that the characters were all pretty cheeky, and that if enough jokes were made, one or two might actually make me laugh. I wasn't really a fan of the protagonist, Emma, mainly due to her strange bout of self-hatred for all things "womanly." There's nothing I can't stand more than a female protagonist who's all, "I don't really like other women. I'm a tomboy! I get along with guys sooooo much better!" However, Emma does eventually somewhat redeem herself when she finds an ally in Marley.

Anyway, so her character was a huge annoyance in the beginning, but after accepting that that was just her voice, etc., she became less distracting, and I was able to enjoy her point of view and all the comedic bits it had to offer. I found myself rooting for her, and felt sympathetic for her inability to emotionally process the horrors that she had experienced.

But it was the pacing of the novel that really stole the show--the plot that races along with the characters in souped-up cars, the seamless transitions from one fight to the next, and the mounting horrors looming around every corner.

The Day Zombies Ruined My Perfectly Boring Life certainly has its share of surprises. At times, I really did feel like I was kicking back and enjoying an X-Files episode. The plot keeps getting new layers added to it, and I was eager to watch the band of misfits survive or at least experience some degree of closure. I was disappointed with the ending, which seemed abrupt, but it was the kind of disappointment that accompanies a strong desire to keep reading. I'll definitely be checking out Jen Naumann's other books and recommend this gem for YA fiction lovers, especially those with a hankerin' for action/adventure, humor, and zombie/apocalyptic genres.